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A Poem of Heartaching Thoughts

A Poem of Heartaching Thoughts

SaturnStarRich Powell
4 Reviews

I'm full of emotion and need to burst,
can no one satisfy my life's thirst?
Drinking cans dry to try to quell the pain,
but what is it that's driving me insane?
The insecurity of a girl that appears eternal,
by the way things look, they are going to turn paternal.
Always and forever is in my heart of hearts,
but how can I put her through my negative parts?
I'm an insecure depressive,
why have I become so possessive?
I think that She means so much to me,
She makes my life full of happiness and glee.
A candlelit dinner,
should make me feel a winner,
but my past is that of a sinner.
How do I fight my insecurity?
I need to find my purity.
I remind myself of our sweet beginnings,
to try to prevent this thinning.
Can I find the strength to endure?
That is one thing that my heart is sure.

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About The Author
SaturnStar
Rich Powell
About This Story
Audience:
12+
Posted:
9 Oct, 2011
Genre:
Romance
Type:
Inspirational, Sad
Words:
156
Favorites:
1
Views:
2,011

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A Poem of Heartaching Thoughts Reviews

4 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
Kaleighishappy
Kat gave a rating of 5

So sincere and loving! Makes the reader wonder more about what happened! The lines didn't feel forced and the words flowed brilliantly! I loved it!!

27 Jan, 2017 0
Rich Powell
Rich Powell - 15 Feb, 2017
Thanks. I guess it's best to write when emotions can flow into words.
Auron
Auron gave a rating of 5

What a beautiful poem! I enjoyed the use of the capitalized 'She' as kiraafinifrock had stated. It makes it seem like the person you are speaking of is very important in your life. It makes the poem more touching and sincere. Great job!

16 Jan, 2017 1
Rich Powell
Rich Powell - 16 Jan, 2017
Thank you for your great review! :)
kiraafinifrock
kiraafinifrock gave a rating of 5

You really showed the battle of overcoming who you once were and accepting yourself so you can feel worthy to another person. You expressed the need you felt in a dark but somehow beautiful way. The fact that you capitalized "She" further showed how you felt toward this person. Seems to me a poem of longing. I enjoyed it.

9 Jan, 2017 1
Rich Powell
Rich Powell - 10 Jan, 2017
Thank you!
Entangled_Fate
🌸Fate gave a rating of 5

Another beautiful poem you shared.

28 May, 2016 1
Rich Powell
Rich Powell - 10 Jan, 2017
Thanks :)

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