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Alabama Wedding (Pt.1) Reviews

Kaleighishappy
Kat gave a rating of 4

Okey, here's my review:
Positive - really got the audience wondering what will happen next and the pot line is going slow enough to get the setting started and gave the reader a sense of what's happening.
Negative- it seems that in some places you forgot to read over the text and it was hard to follow what a few mistaken words meant. I advise reading over it out loud.
(I'm trying the whole criticism thing - am I good at it yet?)
Great so far!! Please do write more! -KP

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TheForgotten
TheForgotten I see what you mean. Thank you for showing me the mistakes! I'll try to fix them sometime.
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