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The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1 Reviews

4 reviews have given an average rating of 4.8 out of 5 Stars
ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 4

I think if I was in her situation, I would be less of the "nobody likes me" and more of "you don't even know me."
But I don't know this character very well yet, and we aren't in her head, so there's some ammount of mystery in regards to what she actually feels.
I'm going to read the next part now.

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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros gave a rating of 5

love it its cute, tbh you came on a little strong on the first few texts, next time just ease into it, but other than that i love it!

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H2o
H2o gave a rating of 5

the perfect amount of salt and sugar.

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Sentimental_creature
⛧ 𝓹𝓻𝓲𝓷𝓬𝓮𝓼𝓼 ⛧ gave a rating of 5

Ugh, this is so sweet, a lil sappy, but sweet. Please, write the next part. Soon.

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Lukas
Lukas I agree. You should totally write this again
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