Accepting the Jungle Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
I agree with lemonslice. You shouldn't start a story without knowing who is speaking.
Beyond that, I enjoyed the story, keep up the good work!
Funny vignette. The trick to writing excellent flash fiction is to cut out all the pleasantries when characters talk. So the "Hello, how are you?" dialogue has to go every time. Also, make sure you don't start with a dialogue without letting the reader know who's talking.
Keep it up!
Oh my gosh, I love it! With littler sibling myself, I hope there will never come the day when I have to watch them suffer through heartbreaks and smiteness (is that a word?).
I love your writing!!!