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Addiction Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 2.5 out of 5 Stars
Kiraa gave a rating of 3

I liked how repetitive the word addiction was because it shows how when you're an addict, it's all you can think of. It was well set up as the short voice an addict has. However, I feel as though you could've done better with the additives in between, possibly by making them more controversial and really showing the battle that addict fight. But I really like the last line.

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 2

You have written better poems than this one. This just does not work for me.


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