In my opinion, even though the middle section did not hold my interest for a long time, the creative ending was memorable. In the middle section, there were too less description of the character. As the story progressed, I could not follow the pace of the narration. In addition to the pacing problem, I personally did not like how the supernatural phenomenon was not fully explored. It is interesting for me to see objects disappearing after a flashing flash of light, but it would be more interesting if the character conducts a few makeshift experiments like throwing a ball to the supernatural, problematic place, for example. However, at the end of the story, the second narrator suddenly appears and says that the story was found in a bottle letter. This adds reality to the story, and I personally like the idea. Taken together, the story is right in the border of okay and poor, personally speaking.