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SANDMAN gave a rating of 5

Outside of the fact that you don't have spellcheck on your computer and that your wound up tighter than a virgin at a prison riot, you have the most wonderful imagination.

I keep thinking how wonderful this would be if it were captured in cartoon animation.

I found it refreshing, a trip to OZ or never never land with a slightly dizzy Peter Pan at the helm.

When they release you from the State Home for the Bewildered, I hope you keep writing more in this genre.

I'm giving you five stars because it is true brilliant.

Ciao, JT


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