an odd conclusion Reviews
Outside of the fact that you don't have spellcheck on your computer and that your wound up tighter than a virgin at a prison riot, you have the most wonderful imagination.
I keep thinking how wonderful this would be if it were captured in cartoon animation.
I found it refreshing, a trip to OZ or never never land with a slightly dizzy Peter Pan at the helm.
When they release you from the State Home for the Bewildered, I hope you keep writing more in this genre.
I'm giving you five stars because it is true brilliant.