Asylum Ch.1 Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.
Myrawiles In this "It's kinda' sick how you people can watch someone waste away behind these frail rusty bars just because they'e short a few chromosomes, don't you think?" you put you they'e instead of they're
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I like it so far. I can't wait to see more of it.
Soul Thank you!
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