This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!

To be honest...WOW! This entire series so far was intense to me. It really does reflect on how most people nowadays jump to conclusions. You better continue this series. I am looking forward to more of your stories. Keep up the outstanding work.

I love the vocabulary in this chapter it makes the story more alluring to read. Can't wait for chapter 3!!