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3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
GrowingPains gave a rating of 5

Wow i think this is amazing, im actually using it as a piece for UIL so good job!! <3

Kat gave a rating of 4

It sounds great, a few punctual and grammatical errors, but so far it sounds pretty good.
I understand what it is to first wade into the water. I slowly went in, but at chest deep I realized that the shore was becoming harder to see.
I find that it is easier to go in than out. You can come in, in less than three minutes. You come out from three months to three years - and to some even more.
It is hard to be in these hardships, you feel that you can't reach out for help because you are embarrassed about what you have done - or feel that they wouldn't understand.
Hang in here! -KP

Kat Well, here or there. My mistake.
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NightDreams00 gave a rating of 5

This is really touching. I read this just a short minute ago and I really loved it. I am also in a similar position. I honestly think there is no hope for my future. Your poem really have got me thinking about what depression truly is.


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