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Be Still, Your Beating Heart Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 4

Your mixture of classic-like phraseology and contemporary modes of speech makes this piece, at times, awkward to read. It feels almost 'jokey' in places, which I'm sure was not what you intended. You do write well, but the inconsistency in your writing 'voice' undermines what you produce.

This IS a good story.

Nathan M Green
Nathan M Green Thanks for the review Andy. Voice is an aspect I'm always fighting with, especially if I don't write the story in one sitting. I'll certainly try to improve my consistency.
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Auron gave a rating of 4

Nice! Reminds me of an X Files episode, but different, nonetheless. I was worried it would be the same, but it wasn't, so I like your originality.

Nathan M Green
Nathan M Green Thank's Auron. I was an X-Files fan back in the day so I wonder if I tapped into that subconsciously.
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