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2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Forever_17
Forever_17 gave a rating of 5

This was really good

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khaledsaeed
Khaled Saeed gave a rating of 4

Thanks, (Somebody)important, you presented it eloquently.
To add to the beautiful style of writing, maybe you would accept some suggestion.
A few line breaks might have been given the reader the right pause.
The following line, (He traveled here every year on this same day, whether it was snowing or sweltering.) may need a rethink. On a given date of the same month, the weather would probably be the variation of the same, not the opposites like snowing or sweltering.
But, once again, thank you so much for such a beautiful piece of captured emotions.

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