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Black Gloves Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
taehyungsmullet
lol⁷ gave a rating of 5

hey, this was pretty good. i liked the ending and i like the characters, though they could have a bit more character depth.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 5

Wow, that took a turn. I love it. I can't help but wonder what happens to them next. I do feel like the writing could use a little more showing than telling, but the characters feel individual, and I like all three of them, and while it hints at a larger story, leaving it here still satisfies me.
My thoughts are all over the place right now...

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K. Kaprie
K. Kaprie I really worry about fleshing out my characters. It was the first serious story I'd ever written, so it has its issues. Thanks for the input!
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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray It's good that it has issues, that way it can get better
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K. Kaprie
K. Kaprie I'm glad that you decided to give a constructive review. It's something I can't get even in my writing class. 💕
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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray I'm glad! It's really hard to get, so I try to give feedback
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