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Bullet in the Heart: Prologue Reviews

IanG
IanG gave a rating of 4

This is a good introduction, it raises a big question while plunging us into a difficult situation for the narrator.

When it comes to the rift between mother and daughter, you could describe other differences besides dress sense. Do they disagree over religion or politics? Has mother betrayed father? Perhaps these issues will become apparent later on.

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