Bullied Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.

SilverOaks That's because it was, as it was only supposed to be a page long and it was due.... 'cause my dad was paying me for it. Also in my defence this was one of my very first stories.
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Durandal Okay
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