Sorry, Matthew, but this is dire. You need to adhere to common grammar and punctuation rules if you want people to take your writing seriously.

It has an impact, for sure.
But, several glaring mistakes could be found in this piece.
Kindly get a copy editor in place; every writer needs an editor, remember.

Again, as with your other work. you ignore the basic rules of writing, which spoils everything you do. This could have been so much better had you taken the time to work on it properly and correcting all of the many errors that are strewn throughout the piece.