Crying Artificial Tears Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
I loved it. I hope to be reading a lot of your stories. I connected gravely to this price of your writing, even though there were a few grammatical errors. If I were your parents/family, I would be proud.
An interesting premise for a story. Well done. Try to take a little more care with your punctuation (can't for cant, for instance) as it spoils your good work.