I personally like this poem, plain words but used in a way that they really touch hearts. The work not only displays your love but also your innocence. Keep it up. And I am really sorry.

I'm so sorry for your loss. I know what it is like to lose someone. Remember all the amazing memories you spent with him. He is looking down on you from heaven. Beautiful poem <3

I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope you feel better <3
This was a beautiful poem <3