Beautifully done. I found this part very moving: 'Ronnie’s learned to walk. She’s up to all sorts of mischief now.' You manage to evoke sympathy for not only your main character but also for the father of such young children. And for the mother who is never going to see her children growing up.

Sad but beautifully done. You evoke the voice of a small child very well.

damn bro that hit hard right after you said "I would love to know that heaven is like <3"

It so sad but so goe