Death Reviews
I feel like you could, and should. You mention Fate, but not like fate. You use it as a person, or a something. So that begs the question of what is doing this? I feel like you could go places with this one. Keep Writing! We will keep reading!
PandaPegasus05 Thank you for your review. The thing about Fate is that it an entirely different being. It is unknown and referred to as Fate. It's basically God.
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