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Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 2

I am a fan of experimental works, but when it is so 'out there' as to be meaningless it undermines whatever you are attempting to achieve. There is little in your poem that allows readers to engage with your words, which is a pity. Poetry should invoke some sort of reaction other than leaving people wondering what the heck they have just read :-0

You are better than this effort. Not your finest hour, in my opinion :-)

PinkyTune Poetry doesn't always have to be meaningful.
It may be about anything our mind wishes to write. It can be a work of pure imagination which may not make sense. That doesn't necessarily convey that the piece of writing is to be..
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