You are a very good writer. The structure of this story is great as have been the other two stories of yours I have read. the first half of the story leads the reader into a completely different assumption of what to expect from what actually gets revealed. It captures your interest with intrigue , and then descends into melancholy romance which ends just right without becoming stilted. Great writing.

oh wow, that ending though! this was amazing!

Great story, It really captured my attention from the get-go!

No, not wandering. Really good.