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Eldritch (Prologue) Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Karly-North gave a rating of 5

Yes write more!!! love it! And I especially love the details and the plot line

Kat gave a rating of 4

Wow! Really good! I love the way you used words that made he setting feel even more suspisious or scary, and you took us into the mind of the wolf cub.
The problem I found was that there was a strange gap between when he cub was sleeping to when he saw his dead sister. How did that happen? Where was the fried or misery?
Doing great! Keep it up!!


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