FIRST KISS Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.3 out of 5 Stars
This is really good! Very well written, though I can see a couple issues with punctuation. I love it though! :D
I think it was a great plot line, and the character does seem like she is in the fifties/ a teenager! Great job!
salpa58 Thank you. :o)
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Some of your punctuation is wrongly placed, which makes reading your narrative somewhat 'jumpy' as it doesn't flow as smoothly as it ought to. However, it is an entertaining story and a peek into life as a teen back in your youth :-)
salpa58 Thank you. It was a first draft and I should have edited it. I am glad you found it entertaining. :o)
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