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FIRST KISS Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Kaleighishappy
Kat gave a rating of 5

I think it was a great plot line, and the character does seem like she is in the fifties/ a teenager! Great job!

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salpa58
salpa58 Thank you. :o)
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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

Some of your punctuation is wrongly placed, which makes reading your narrative somewhat 'jumpy' as it doesn't flow as smoothly as it ought to. However, it is an entertaining story and a peek into life as a teen back in your youth :-)

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salpa58
salpa58 Thank you. It was a first draft and I should have edited it. I am glad you found it entertaining. :o)
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