I usually don't read things along these lines but the story was well written and left suspense at every corner. The ending was quite unsatisfying; but I believe you did that for a reason. Good job.

i really liked it

Through out life we all have adventures, at times they are romantic ones. Andy has done a stellar job on this story. Paul ugh, well read the story and you will see what I mean. Carol conjures up other feelings. I thought she might become famous, but....well I don't want to give it away so read it yourself.
Before I got to the ending I had many ideas of what would happen and I think you will too. Good job Apeman.