Really cool so far. The way it's written is very distinct, but if you did that on purpose, then well done. Either way, I'll read the rest.
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melissak thank you. I was unaware of the disorganization, but I do apologize for not continuing this book
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Thomas Ray Don't apologize. It's your writing, you can work on any story and nobody should complain. (Except in joking, maybe) I've worked on over twenty full length novel stories, and my record in words is 16,000 words. Not a full length book at all, and not a finished story. Trying new characters, worlds, and plots is essential when learning to write.
Sorry if this sounds negative, I'm not in the greatest mood...
Sorry if this sounds negative, I'm not in the greatest mood...