This story was very sad and creepy! Keep up the work! Have a nice day, be safe.

wow that was intense. so well written. I was not expecting any of that at all. this was amazing. keep up the good work!

so awesome!!!!!!

That was an amazing pott. In the middle when the girls were killed i felt as if I was going to cry it has such a powerful way of putting it across. The message behind it is amazing.

I really enjoyed your story;?especially the plot began to thicken with the emotions of Billy and why he did what he did. Despite the story taking a dark turn I understand the message you were trying to get across.

Good story with a good theme, however at times it was a little rushed which made it hard to read in certain parts. Other than that it was really good. I liked the purple wings, it shows a kid's imagination well.