Amazing, showed passion and clearly created the emotions of the poem. It cut deeply into me and I hope that if you're going through that - that everything works out alright. (Animals help a lot)
-KP

There is a great deal of emotion and passion in your poem. You have expressed them well. Some of the lines are perhaps a little convoluted and 'forced', but the whole is better then some of its parts :-) I hope to read more from you soon!