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4 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
lemonslice gave a rating of 3

I liked the twist but I disliked the use of the adverb in "yells loudly". How do you yell "silently"?

Andy (Formerly Apemann)
Andy (Formerly Apemann) Good point. :-)
Edited and corrected.
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Kat gave a rating of 4

Pretty good, but I propose use of the ';' in the beginning. What should've taken it's place was the '-', which would signal that the narrator was adding on a peice of information.
Nice work!

Andy (Formerly Apemann)
Andy (Formerly Apemann) The semi-colon is the CORRECT punctuation as it indicates exactly what you suggest the hyphen does...
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From_Me gave a rating of 4

it was good!

Rich Powell gave a rating of 5

I think many nine-to-fivers can relate.

Andy (Formerly Apemann)
Andy (Formerly Apemann) ... and the self-employed! :-)
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