Beautiful! <3
That hook is amazing; right from the first line I felt that I was really drawn into what would be said next. Hooks are something I really struggle with, so I can recognize a really well written one when I see it.
I also just really love it in general. When I read this, it was a little crazy because I was imagining like inspirational music in the background and the ending really showed how the speaker's views had changed. Spectacular!!! <3