Life Is Not Hopeless Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Excellent! I really liked this one! So inspiring!
I thought the story was rather good in my opinion. I liked the theme of this piece, you had very good description. I don't think it got to a point of unbearable 'preachy' tone. Keep writing, I like the direction this story is going!
PinkyTune I am glad you found it interesting!
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PinkyTune Thanks for the 4 starts! But, why one star less? Was there any mistake?
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TheForgotten Oh no it was lovely I just don't give five stars until the piece is finished. I didn't catch any mistakes, although English is my first language and I still don't understand it all that well. You did a great job on this story!
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Your story has many imperfections, which I attribute to English not being your first language. On the whole it is a fair attempt at an interesting subject, in spite of the sometimes 'preachy' tone you have used. Please bear in mind that people read to be entertained, not moralised to...
PinkyTune Thanks a lot for pointing out my mistakes!
By "imperfections", do you mean any type of linguistical errors? I would try my best to rectify the "imperfections" present in my story.
And, does the 'preachy' tone seem irritating? If so, I shall remove it.
By "imperfections", do you mean any type of linguistical errors? I would try my best to rectify the "imperfections" present in my story.
And, does the 'preachy' tone seem irritating? If so, I shall remove it.
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