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3 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Myrawiles
Myrawiles gave a rating of 5

this was magnificent great job

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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 2

The constant repetitive lines and the awkward and clumsy rhymes really spoil this effort. Also, the way you have presented it - in paragraphs instead of more traditional stanzas - jars the eye.

As you said, at least you tried...

I hope you will - individually - submit further works. It will be interesting to read more from you :-)

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erinmilligan12
Erin Milligan gave a rating of 5

Love when we write together <3

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Heartaches.13
Heartaches.13 Me too baby girl <3
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