I Want to Be a Bird Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
The story is so beautiful! I wonder what happen to Snow 😯, Maybe she flew home, I get the story! And it’s sad, you did good on the writing, keep up the work! Have a nice day!
eloise2006 the story was longer and I did include what happened to snow, but I decided to take that out just to include that idea of mystery. You have a nice day too!!
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You should've used capital letters for God and you forgot it for Snow the first time you mentioned her. That said, its an interesting subject for animal lovers and nature lovers. Keep practising and you'll improve.
eloise2006 Thank you so much, I am definitely going to keep improving and hopefully will be able to get better and better, maybe one day make something out of it. Thank you for your feedback.
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