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If I Had Known Reviews

3 reviews have given an average rating of 3.3 out of 5 Stars
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

This is a good-ish poem. My issue with it is that the overuse of the "If I had known" line somewhat detracts from the overall poem. I think you could have said as much - and as effectively - if you'd presented your poem in two or three stanzas with the hook line at the beginning of each stanza.

I look forward to reading more from you :-)

TheForgotten gave a rating of 2

This story is good, however it is almost exactly like one I wrote before this...

Auron gave a rating of 5

Wow! This is great, I love this a lot! Write more poems, you have he talent in you.



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