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I'll Come for You Part 2 Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Kat gave a rating of 5

Sounds great, trust me. The parts could be a little longer but besides that I believe that you're all good👍🏻

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

This is developing into an interesting story. Unfortunately the errors in the piece detract from its overall effectiveness. Please take more care with your punctuation. It is spoiling otherwise good work as it interrupts the 'flow' of the narrative.

TheForgotten I am deeply sorry about the errors, I'll fix this story as soon as I can.
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