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In God's Name Reviews

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

There is something quite soulless about this piece. I read it through twice and found myself somewhat distanced from it; disengaged, even. I think the problem is the 'coldness' in which it is written (understandably given the subject matter) is perhaps too cold and remote. The style does not invite the reader to engage emotionally with the work.

Your writing is usually very entertaining. For me, this one did not work as well as some of your other stories.

Nathan M Green
Nathan M Green I'm impressed with your critique. You hit the nail on the head. I wrote this a while back and I do remember being disconnected from it when I wrote it. I didn't realise it came over into the writing. Thank you for your honesty and taking the time to read and review.
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