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It Became Too Much Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
RebelSoul
RebelSoul gave a rating of 5

I never understood why everyone blames people who commit suicide, or call them cowards. It is a terrifying thing to hold a knife to yourself or to tie a rope knowing its going to hurt, hoping it doesn't hurt as bad as everything else had prior. The real problem will always be those you see the problem and do nothing anyways.

I like this alot, thank you for sharing it.

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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

Hmm...

To be honest my first impression after reading this poem is that it is 'self-pitying': someone begging forgiveness for committing suicide. It left me feeling a little put-out by it as it just doesn't feel right.

It's not a bad poem, just the subject matter that doesn't work for me.

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PoeticT
PoeticT lol thanks for commenting dude :)
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