Ka Reviews
4 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Nice story, and congrats on the 50,000 words! Do you think you'll ever publish a novel?
Thomas Ray Maybe. Hopefully! Not that one though
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A relatable slice of life 👍👍
Keep it up 😁
This story sounds like the beginning of something brilliant! I was a little confused as it progressed, but idrc, it'll probably make more sense later on. I can't wait to read more!
And congratulations on your accomplishments!!! 🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈
Thomas Ray Brilliant? Wouldn't that be nice.
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Despicable_Moi idk. just the way things were phrased gave me dystopian vibes (not saying it is, it's just my interpretation) and I got the feel that the character's about to go on some heroic journey and I'm sure however/wherever you take this, it's going to be really awesome (assuming you continue with it)! :)
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Thomas Ray I might just do that...
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The opening is poetic and the dialogue is plausible. Well done. Perhaps you could've spread the descriptions more evenly through the story but that's a minor quibble. Congratulations on your 50,000 hits.
Thomas Ray Thank you!
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