Ooh, I really like this one. I like the unique style of telling a story through letters, especially at the end where we can only assume we know why the brother quit writing. This is a story that I would want more of, except I don't know if it could work to expand on it; that would change the feel of it. Anyway, really good work.

okay it's really sad, specially the end. It feels like he's dead.
awesome; you derive great depths from simple words.
Keep it up

Wow!!!

That was a very clever way to convey a story. It was very inspiring. Good job!

That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this. It was so creative and clever!