Living Fears Reviews
I'm not sure why you chose to present your work in such a form as it was unnecessary (and a little confusing, to be honest)
Overall the poem is good, if a little overlong and slightly repetitive in places. A like your imagination and your use of words. You clearly take a great deal of care over your work and choose your words carefully. There are some who could learn a thing or two from you :-)
Well done and keep writing. It's a pleasure to read your work.
Elisenicole2014 Thank you very much. I wrote this a while back and have always fought with the structure myself. Had a highschool teacher tell me to extend it and write it differently than I had originally done, though I always kind of liked my first version better. I'll add it on here, if you happen to come across it, would love to know what you think.
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