You will be one of the greatest writer one day...and maybe a composer also becoz you love to sing

Awww... so sweet. I hope they do love again. I love that your writing was easy to read, but if your open to constructive criticism, I'd recommend making some sentences a bit shorter. I also loved the "pumpy-umpy-umpkin" phrase! I've never heard that before, but it's sooo creative! I can't wait to read more of your creations! <3 :)