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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 4

The only thing I don't really like about this is the stealing diapers part. There wasn't really a precedent for that, and I guess I could have missed something..... It just doesn't share the dream-like memory aesthetic the rest of this has. I love the last two paragraphs, though. They bring everything full circle, and that's awesome.

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lol⁷ Hah, to be honest it was the first thing that popped into my mind, and I liked it, so I stuck with it. Thank you!
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