Lu (Part Five) Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
I'm so intrigued to read more about Lu. I would've put more description into the hideout where she saw the stares personally, but that's just how I am. I already have an idea of there looks besides the boy without green eyes and Henna. It's so interesting
Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Thomas Ray What are your predictions? I'd actually love to know.
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Optimism101 Hrm, well, I think that the "utopia" she's found is fake. Something isn't right here. You can't just walk into a fancy life. They need her for something and THey are trying to bribe her. Ren wouldn't be in it, and would buddy up with Lu to fight against the people. I think that were going to learn slightly more and more about Fin, and what happened. Now, the boy, well, we haven't heard anything about him since chapter... two, I think. But I'm fairly certain he comes back, whether as a last-minute-save-the-day plot device, or someone else against the place. Oh, Lord Ayren doesn't look stable, and you've made that quite clear in chapter 4. And Henna... I'm not sure what's going to happen to Henna. Maybe she joins the ragtag team against everyone else. And, even though I've said everything about the utopia being fake, but they could also go after where Lu came from, and get those people back to normal. These are my predictions. Am probably wrong, but It will be fun to see how the story plays out. I now see that there is a chapter 6 (have not read it), but this is my predictions for chapter 5
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Thomas Ray Interesting. You're not all wrong, and not all right. I'm excited to share the rest.
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