Molly Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 3.5 out of 5 Stars
Spice up your way of story telling, while I'm into these kinds of stories, I can't lie when I say I see potential. Just make the story more interesting, describe the atmosphere and setting a little more, set the scene and play the events out.
BookishForever23 Thanks for your review! I added some of that in chapter 2! I just have to wait until you guys can see it!
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I'd say to continue, for some reason it's catching my attention. The grammar usage was off at times and the techniques can be dull but it's an intriguing story for me, I'd want to know what happens.
BookishForever23 Thank you for your review! I will make some changes
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