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2 reviews have given an average rating of 3.5 out of 5 Stars
You were brave to shy away from a soppy but happy ending.
So so sad..... You are very talented SamZ.
I liked the build up of the story, all except for the last line; I think the ending needs some more work to make it 'complete' I'm sure it will be worth it!
SamZ thank you soo much. it means a lot. thank you for the advice too, I edited it as you suggested :)
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