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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros gave a rating of 4

it was good but (this is going to sound weird but) with future works, maybe try to make the rhyming lines go ABABCDCD... or something like that instead of AABBCCDD because it does give a different feel so idk just try it out, otherwise, l like the words

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Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik
Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik Thanks, I only like rhyming if it happens naturally x
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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros ya, I kinda got that vibe, and just to clarify I really do like it but it was just a thought.
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