No Longer Am I Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 2.3 out of 5 Stars
Not sure what you're trying to say with this piece. It's too short and disjointed at the moment.
Short but I do understand what you are saying. Keep writing and move forward. You can make it as anything you want to be. I have high hopes for you has a fellow writer.
Your few words have no real impact or relevance. I fail to grasp what point you were (presumably) trying to make.
This reads like the whining of a bratty child who cannot get her own way and not what you claim: the true feelings of a teenage girl.
Other's have presented similar works and done a much better job of it. This really is not good.
V_c29 It is good do not tell me it isn't . Your opinion of it does matter to me because I myself think it is a wonderful story. Just watch I myself am going to be a writer and if you think it is no then oh well but I love writing and it is the escape and the onky thing I have .
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