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Lussac gave a rating of 5

Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)

Neil K Spencer
Neil K Spencer Thank you for your advice I'll take it on board and look at correcting the mistakes. Many thanks again.
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