I have felt like doing all of these things to myself but I think God really wants me to be on this earth because every time I try doing something like that somebody always walks into the room.

I like how repetitive it was and how it flowed, and I also like the format. I especially like the ending because it shows how resolved everything is in the end. Good poem

Honestly I wish it was ok
But some people don't get a happier ever after
Sometimes you just can't do it anymore
Sometimes the hurt
Wins

Your work is very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

I like reading your work. It reflects to everyday thoughts to some or most people. You encourage and send out the message in a soft and bright way. Thank you and please do keep you the good work.

I really liked this poem, it flowed well and it had a sweet mother like feel to it. I believe it's a very relate able topic, suicide is often thought about daily for some. Good job!